Hawk pays a visit
Jan 31, 2026
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Hawk brings some good luck and a bit extra :p
Well, that was amusing, hawk can be protection or good luck... but then it pooped on the windshield so i am like "huh..." :p I take it to mean more indigenous to this half of the world woman will come back here!
Today my head has been buzzing with stories and how I want the opening scene of the tv show to go... For Starfleet Alyeska, for book 2 there is a huge battle about to happen between Earth goblins (who are now in space trying to sneak attack a human settlement) and our crew. The boss goblin is sneaking in via the void, not many can travel in it, we can go for short periods only but somehow the goblin can travel the vast distance safely if slowly. We would never have detected it if we had not gone to the void ourselves.
My daughter tried to make an Ewok looking Fura for me ;p They are agile fighters and just a bit shorter then my People so about 5'2 where she is 5/3", my Fura, so kangaroo feet seemed like a good idea :p My graphic artist will do my drawing, but my one daughter loves ai...

Because there is a monstrously large reward for the Fura queen's jewelry, big trash haulers are everywhere and so common now no one pays attention to them. Our girl is stuck at the Counsel of 6 plus 23 and bored out of her mind since everyone wants to meet her and she hates that sort of thing. So when they get a low level intel report saying a suspicious garage hauler was spotted she jumps on it. Normally it is ignored as they are common and people sneak into areas others paid to search all the time. But she was desperate to escape the confines of being a diplomat so jumped on it. It turns out the hauler is full of goblins!
But I keep going back and forth on whether that is just her good luck or if it is too cliche... half of me says rewrite it woman now! other half says it is good and maybe predictable but fits the story... it drives me crazy when I am unsure! I mean I wrote it good enough with enough tension and such but I also worry it is too cliche... so I decided to write a new scene then choose between the 2 and put the leftover one into my companion guide for the writing workshop portion to explain my choices and why...
But boy, I am really excited to write book 3, it is only in my head right now but helps set the scene for the tv show where they do a lot of infiltrate and gather intel. Did you ever watch the sci fi one called Dark Matter with the Raza crew? They did an episode where they did something like that and I loved it so want to do something like that in mine too...

So my weekend will most likely be me driving myself crazy unnecessarily :p I hope yours will be more interesting!
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